I just re-read the novel “sketch” I wrote in the Outline A Novel In An Hour workshop at OryCon. The Jason described in that sketch is a lot harder, a lot more evil, than the Jason I’m thinking about now. That Jason combines the current Jason’s computer skills with Sienna’s motivations and priorities. That Jason is a more interesting character, but not as sympathetic. Which would be better for the novel? I admit I like Sienna better as a character than the current Jason. Even if Jason is fighting against his privileged background, as I considered yesterday, he’s still a bit of a nebish, a nonentity — not a good central character for a “near-future medical thriller with aliens.” But the Jason I outlined at OryCon is so harsh I wonder if the reader will identify with him, and for him to turn around at the end and work to save the aliens might not be believable. What if he doesn’t turn around? What if he remains committed to the cause? That makes him a villain — makes him Sienna. The challenge then is that the reader has to overcome his/her initial prejudices to consider the heroic human freedom fighter as the villain and the evil alien overlord as the hero. I could structure the whole book that way, with Clarity as the main character and hero and Jason as the villain (this new Jason would basically be the current Sienna with Jason’s skills). This book would start with Remembrance Day and be entirely about the plague. (Long pause for thought.) No, I think not. Jason must at least start out as a sympathetic guy. Once the reader is attached to him I can drag him deeper and deeper into the resistance, let him lose his conscience, but in the end when he turns on Sienna and saves the aliens it is in keeping with his earlier personality. So what is it that drives him into the resistance in the first place? It can’t just be that he gets involved with Sienna; he has to have a personal reason to want to bring the aliens down. But it still has to be plausible for him to turn around later, when he learns more about the aliens and who’s really responsible for the repression. Ponder ponder ponder…